Through The Years (Tell Me) -

Through The Years (Tell Me) 09/08/2008

(This one might be rewritten in song format)

Little and delicate

Simple and sweet

There was one thing missing

That I thought would be neat

It was all I wanted

Just two little words

Could somebody tell me

“You're Beautiful”

Older and sassy

Wide-eyed and sweet

Still missing that one thing

That I thought would be neat

It was all I wanted

Just two little words

Could somebody tell me

“You're Beautiful”

Matured and Independent

Bold and sweet

Yet still one thing missing

That I thought would be neat

It was all I wanted

Just two little words

Could somebody tell

“You're Beautiful”

Not my mom

Or my dad

Nor someone who previously had

I wanted somebody, anybody

To tell me

“You're Beautiful”

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Prince Charming

Wed, 12 Nov 2008 19:57:30

It definitely sounds more like a song to me than a poem, but doesn't matter what you gonna turn it into later on, it's a great piece of art. The message and the way you feel couldn't be more clear, and I hope that soon you can look into the mirror and say: Yes I am beautiful!

I tell you often that you are beautiful (and no I not only tell you that because I love you!), and I know/hope that you believe it when I tell you. I wouldn't lie to you!

I love you Sugar Cookie, I love you more than you know and for me you'll always be beautiful. Beautiful and special like a pearl in the ocean!

Semblance

I am but an image
Built from your own mind
A similitude of growing old
And feeling dull
I'm just a feeling
Created from the depths of your soul
A likeness only of her emotion
And a pretense of her similarity
Sometimes feebleminded
Sporadically seethe with understanding
A conception of representation
A mere fragment, a breath of life
Befitting an aura of darkness
Absorbed by doubt
Just a pretext of air
I am almost wasting space
I am but an analogy
Lost but cosigned with hope
You chose to confiscate me
Don't mask my beauty
I am what I am!

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